03 March 2008

Week3- Cause&Effect- Erkan: Steps to My Essay-2

Step 4. Thesis:
Among many things, the three major factors that lead to failure among university students are the difficulty adapting to a new environment and life-style, failing to take responsibilty, and financial difficulties.
Step 5. Introduction:
Think about the stressful time you had when preparing for the university; we all had one aim: getting into a university. Every year thousands of students have to go through the same painful process: countless hours of studying, many tests taken, sleepless nights figting over stress of risk of failing the university entrance exam, dreaming about how their lives would change after getting into university, and so on. Entering a university is a dream for many that is difficult to come true. So why is it that many students fail their university courses when their dreams come true? There may be many factors causing failure at university, but among others there are three major issues that lead to student failure: adapting to a new environment and life, managing responsibility of staying on one's own feet, and dealing with financial difficulties.
[time spent: 1 hour - 10 to 11 pm]

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